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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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Like one we've become without each other, undone. Closer then lovers we are, yet seperated by time and many a bar. You read my mind, with each other we unwind. You're open, so open, and to each other devotion. Be free we say, always choose your own way. We love life, and help each other through stife. No worries or stress, no fear of the desire to undress. An attraction is there, yet no want of an affair. Complicated it is indeed, but we live by the same creed. For life we will be friends, through all the ups and downs and bends. 3/14/02 |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
My first in months! I think....  Whohoo anyhow...I've been going through a lot lately.... and one friend is becoming quite dear. May the Black Widow please stand up...  Sincerely, Titus  Will I ever forget what happened today? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awwww this is such a sweet poem! Sounds like you really got someone special!!! Cant wait til I see more of your work!!!~It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
*stands up and hugs Titus* Thank you. This was a very, very nice thing for me to read first thing in the morning. Something pleasent to wake up to. Couldn't have said it better myself... in fact, I'm not showing you the poem I wrote. lol Love, Your Memina "Oh chit! Which pictures did I send you!"  -- the calm before the storm -- La vie est plus belle quand on l'ecrit soi-meme. turningthepage.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (03-14-2002 06:50 AM).] |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ti that is so pretty hehe. hey i am takin a trip to TN and have to stop in phoniex i'll talk to you bout it on aim later ok. i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Aerhercnian Junior Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 10Listening |
I really enjoyed the read And there stood Aechercnian silent and calm listening to the trees. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i liked this one a lot.....its going in my library....can't wait 2 see more bye 4 now   ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Haha, it would be funny if the wrong person "stood up!" Anyway, great poem, and I hope with the help of your friend the sky is looking a little brighter... ~Lisa |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Titus Titus Titus. Why hast thou not written lately? Wait -- I know the answer to that. *grins* Lovely my cat-killer, just lovely! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
In My Mind's Eye, In My Mind's Eye... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
yay ti!! Im so happy to see you posting!!! This person sounds like a phenominal friend Your very lucky!! Great write and i hope to see some more posts from you shortly! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Titus, This is a sweet poem! Too bad it isn't written about me lol but it's still very heartfelt. You better post more often!! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Hey, very cool piece. Good luck! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"Phenominal friend", huh?  Just kidding. Titus do you want to see the one I wrote? I finished it. I'm unstuck now. lol I'm printing this one out and putting it into my journal. I cut myself today! I was breaking a mirror with a hammer and a piece of glass somehow managed to find it's way into my arm. Kiss it all better! I used to say that when I was little. "I kiss it all better!" Hmm... I'm rambling. I'll shut up now.  -- the calm before the storm -- |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Check your email ~ Titus  My motto... always changing, always improving, veiwing life in veiw of eternity. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
sweet Zombie |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
awesome! A life without love…is no life at all. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
very illustrative. i like the rhythm. i'm a suck for rhythm. great rhyme. /gwen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Hahaha... thanks you all!!!! I appreciate your comments.This poem means a lot to me.. My Memina, you are dear to me! ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
hey ... i havnt been here in a while or talked to you in awhile but thank you for being thier for me... but now about this poem OMG i loved keep it up i really missed your work and now i know why *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Andrea! Hi! Yes, indeed, I did miss you... so glad you're back. Thank you so much for the comments...  Looking forward to seeing you around... ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful declaration of love, sweet friend, I hope you have found that special somebody for you deserve the greatest happiness always! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you Noah! "without each other, undone. Closer then lovers we are," This is more true today then ever. ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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