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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-10-31 02:56 PM

a sharp pain of despair
cutting my heart into pieces
scattered like so many fallen leaves

the spread of butterflies in my gut
a twist of hopeless illusion grandeur
reaching the night of obsidian stars

forever lost in an encompassing dream
fated to repeat a childhood gone by
a hope I let slip through my hand

innocent tears not able to be shed
peace bestowed but lost in the confusion
of the ageless answer that wont come out right

searching so long not knowing what I seek
regrets I wished I could turn back
I've lost everything not able to believe

a shapless lie I see so very clearly
mirror image that was my faith
ground into a silky dust of obsolete ivory

my soul torn apart at the seams
missing links never to be replaced
evanescent I slowly meld into nothing

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-11-01 01:53 AM

WOW...tiffers this is awesome!...really dark and vivid. liked it LOTS!

"......",said the wise mute.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-11-01 07:55 PM

I ditto Cherish. Great piece.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-11-02 01:10 AM

Awesome job!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-02 11:28 AM

Wow...u can really feel the pain in this one!! Great job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

5 posted 2001-11-04 07:11 PM

ooh this one's really, really good Tifferage! *nods* I liked its depth a lot. "forever lost in an encompassing dream, fated to repeat a childhood gone by, a hope I let slip through my hand" I really liked that stanza. Write on!
__o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves*

Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly.

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