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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Standing in moon light Your standing by Tears bluring my sight I hear you sigh heart bleeding on my shirt standing by the way side cloths red and stained you cast them aside lost sight of my path it's covered in dust there's goes your path all filled with lust stubbling begging and bleeding my heart and mind are compeating one thought on my mind one crack in my heart will she ever come back if not, i blame the art ---Written by:Hoppy 3-4-00 i could be bounded in a nut shell and count myself king of infinite space |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What an amazing piece..this has so much feeling in it. WoW...fantastic job! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You blame the art, huh? Wow. Great jog on this one! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Fantastic poem I loved it! Lauren |
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