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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-10-30 07:54 PM

You’ve grown from an angel
Into a seraphim,
While I’ve drifted on my own path,
And my lights’ve grown dim.

Our dreams were once the same,
But now they seem so odd,
You’re on your right track,
And I’m just a facade.

So we’ve gone our different ways,
And it seems you’ve only shone,
You’ve glittered and you glistened,
While I turned to tender stone.

So I wish you well,
And don’t you ever fade,
You’re one of my few lights,
At the end of the tunnel I wade.

"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2001-10-30 11:06 PM

i liked this alot. great job on it.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-31 12:22 PM

Aww! Great job on this one!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-10-31 02:04 AM

OH WOW!!! this is awesome adamz! i LOVE the ending...its really beautiful...but i dont like the way you describe what youve become in contrast to this other person...

its sad in that respect..but very well done on the poem buds..you did an outstanding job on the format ( PSST! you have to teach me sumtime!)...keep writing, poet...

"......",said the wise mute.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-10-31 08:34 AM

Great job. I really like the way you write, it speaks to me.

Nice.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-10-31 10:08 AM

I enjoyed this...unfortunately people tend to grow apart...who knows where the paths of life will take us...but everything happens for a reason...good job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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