Teen Poetry #5 |
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Murmurs |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
im tired of the whispers i can hear them clearly a murmur of soundless breath exhaled across my mind barely audible i feel you a fathomless rustle of speach creeps over my bare flesh sensations of sound dancing i hear what goes unspoken as i hear what you say i feel the engulfing length spreading its wings between us “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
ooh! I like this one! i especially like the "I hear what goes unspoken, as I hear what you say" part! really well-written, Tifferz! *hugz* luv ya! __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves* Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly. |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
ooh, i like this one. honestly i don't think it's as strong as some of your other work, but very enjoyable none the less. oh, one thing. *speech not speach. - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Last stanza: Awesome! Keep it up! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautifully written...i enjoyed this one a lot..great job and keep em comin! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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