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silence yourself
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silence yourself |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Silence yourself the words hurt to much there was a time I didn't cring with your touch silence yourself your eyes cut like a knife now even your very breath seems to destroy life Silence yourself those happy little dreams cause your reality is torn at the seams Silence yourself in your self ambitious state don't think of us or our untimely fate Silence yourself I don't want to hear you talk cause all you are is talk you can't even walk Silence yourself cause your annoying me to death my body trembles with the sound of your breath Silence yourself don't you see what you do all the "little" things you put me through Silence yourself I'm over your stupid mind game I just wish sometimes I didn't know your name Silence yourself you've killed me already with your knife in your hand held so steady Silence yourself cause it's you I can't stand and now I silence myself cause this poem is about me don't you understand. we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I don't know what to say about this one! Great poem, so full of pain and hurt (duh, right?)... I just... like it! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. Pure anger here. It reminds me of "Don't Speak" by No Doubt. A little harsher tho I think.  Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This one was definately chock-full-of-anger...it was a great read!! Full of emotion...well done! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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