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Teen Poetry #5

more then 1 rhym

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-05-24 01:27 PM

you know tha dayz are nice
you know ain't no lie.
yo'll gotts ta relax
then you rest then kcik back.
do you have ne clue
that i have a major crush on you?
if i tell ya i don't know wutt you do
but in life aloota thingz we go through
you no it ain't nuthin new.
now iss good juss ta chat
if you wanna juss hit me back.

from dunphy

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2002-05-25 12:26 PM

Hey- nice to see your work again.
I'm sure the person this was written for would be flattered, maybe you should show it to her? Nice job on showing your thoughts.
Keep writing

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-05-26 02:26 AM

Rappy snappy .....i liked.
Haven't seen a poem like this one for a while now. Nice style...write more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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