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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi everyone, Here is a new one, and it's not a sad one. "YEAH" hehe. Well, it's something I started a while back. I had a crush, on the actress, "Melissa Joan Hart".(you know how teen-guys get)  and thought I might as well just finish it. So here it is!!Best Wishes, Brian. "She is" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1: She's beautiful, Unbelievable. So incredible...She is. She's wonderful, Desirable. A secret untold...She is. Chorus: She's a painting, painted by the painters of life. She's a poem, written by the poets of the Gods. She's a rose, unfolding in the pouring sunlight. She's a song, sung by the Angel choir in our hearts. Verse 2: She's such a sight, Such gourges eyes. A ray of light..She is. She's high on life, Pretty inside. Stuck in my mind..She is. Re-Chorus: Bridge: Her face is surrounding me, Can't think straight, I can't sleep. She caught me in a heart beat, Don't fade, don't be a dream. I Don't know what to do...'Cause!! Re-Chorus: |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Loved the bridge on this and this line as well: other than it being about mellisa joan hart  i thought this was pretty good. it flowed well for a poem/song. nice work~tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, still posting, and still posting songs. I really really liked this one. Very well written song. Melissa *sigh* yep yep....we all loved her hehe....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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