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-Queth-
Junior Member

since 2002-02-10

Posts 35
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-28 10:41 PM

A shadow danced upon the wind

It sighed within its honeyed tune

A flower blossomed in the aire

Reflected on a silver spoon.

A watching eye, with lashes long

Had dusted 'way her azure dreams

In light, a blinded hand did touch

A wayward ocean's bloody stream.

Moonlit streets played solitaire

Stones of red and black possessed

By dancing 'pon the trailing wind

A wandr'ing souless arabesque.

[Another piece based on abstract art and dance. Although old, in some way, it is one of my favorites. Enjoy at your leisure!]

Q.u.e.t.h.

Everything in between...

[This message has been edited by -Queth- (02-28-2002 10:46 PM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-01 12:22 PM

What a lovely poem and your meter and rhyme were right on, kudos this was great!

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-03-01 05:40 PM

Queth-
This is excellent!
I love the way your mind works...very creative.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-02 09:41 AM

This was so beautiful!!! You certaintly do have a lot of talent

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-03-02 12:46 PM

Lately I've been wondering when I would be able to have the pleasure to read another one of your poems..you do provoke my imagination and you have an amazing imagination yourself!! *sigh* mine kinda grew up along with me..my imagination goes only as far as dreaming of white knights and dragons and such:P anyways, I could ramble on about how much I love your poem but I don't think I could ever stop!!

Kristen

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

5 posted 2002-03-02 07:20 PM

Hey, Q...this is yet another great peice from your wonderful mind! You never seem to have your poems linked to one specific thing...it's always variating! I like that! Well met!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2002-03-02 07:29 PM

I really liked this poem. I thought you wrote it quite nicely. Your use of vocabulary is great, and I liked the style of it. The ryhme was wonderful and the meaning was deep. Well done. I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2002-03-03 03:44 AM

ahh anything that has anything to do with dance im in love with

this was beautiful...very deep

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

8 posted 2002-03-03 05:03 PM

You have a wonderful rythmn and meter althrough this poem, although what really made it for me was the imagery, it is a very beautiful and descriptive language with fantastical (is that a word?) imagery that seemed to move with your rythmn and meter. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of poetry.

Zu

If you see this message I have just replied to your poem. I have poems as well *hint*

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