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ForeverMyOwn
Junior Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 13
Brighton, MI

0 posted 2002-02-28 10:04 PM

Go away, get away,
I dont want to feel this way.
Pull this way, Push that way,
Don't make me be that way.

I'll just try to live,
don't wanna be noticed.
My patience can give,
then im gonna be pissed.

You push me around,
my limits are about to blow.
I try to hold my ground,
but the rivers gotta flow.

I'm about to fly,
your gonna make me flip.
Do you think I'm a lie,
that i can't make you rip.

Go away, get away,
I dont want to feel this way.
Pull this way, Push that way,
Don't make me be that way.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-28 10:18 PM

Great work...Dont let anyone push you around, you are stronger then anyone thats pitiful enough to do that

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

2 posted 2002-03-01 10:00 PM

Hey good job tiz really great "WOW" hehe... keep it up n dont let ne one push u around hehehe..

:)Peace :)

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-02 09:40 AM

this was....AWESOME....i loved it so much...so much feeling and strength in your words!! nicely done hun!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-03-02 07:31 PM

I liked it. Kind of sounded more like lyrics of a punk song for some odd reason. Anyhow, well done and I hope to read more from you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

5 posted 2002-03-03 03:42 AM

i like this..and im with dopes, would make good lyrics

awesome..

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2002-03-03 08:45 AM

Whoa...Dopes was in here.

Now back to the piece. People never go away. They'll always be there to push and pull at us. Apparently it stops eventually but *coughs* yeah...

Anyway, it read through well. Nice job.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

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