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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its a miracle i tell you, A living being who has a million traits Is able to be seen by the naked eye. But yet, She's so invisible. Unless called on for a favor, She's rarely called on at all. Lost admist endless personalities, Laughs and emotions. SHe sits there still, Practically without a name to all who surround her. iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Michele, it seems we all feel like this sometimes. I hate that this is how youre feeling(if this is you). I think you wrote this well and think the title goes very well. LOVE your location dear. ~tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
hey tiff and thanks for the reply! Yup im def writing about me..this is such a sucky feeling but unfortunately too many people can relate. Thanks again for replying and glad you liked the poem and location! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Uck- darn people, how hard is it just to be appreciated around here?  I relate girl  Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
feeling a tad exploited huh? such days are sucky but i guess they add spice to our life experiences... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yeah, I think all of us feel this way sometimes. I guess we just have to hope this doesn't happen very often... It's really not a good feeling. Sometimes you don't know whether you should be happy that you're left alone (able to enjoy the solitude), or to be sad that you're remembered only for your giggles, or as someone who is REALLY helpful...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea i always find it amusing when i wish i was alone and am surrounded by people who are bugging me and then when im alone i wish to be surrounded by people..i guess its human nature never to be satisfied with what ya got...thanks bot for your replies iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Door mats have this unprecictable trait of picking themselves up and shaking themselves off when there is too much dirt accumulated on top from the wiping of a myriad of feet. It is an unfortunate fact that it will be the one dusting off their feet at the time of that cathartic decision that will find themselves suddenly upon their bottom... it happens.... I know.... I am a fellow doormat... or atleast I was... God forbid you ever say a pointed "NO" or question mercanariously "So what's in it for me" You will find that your true friends will still be there but you will have dropped all the dead weight from your life. Just don't try to convince yourself that you actually reap benefits from doing all those "favours". Or you will become as guilty as those who whip their feet upon you. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (05-28-2002 06:25 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you for the insight. I never really thought of it that way and now that i've read your reply i have to sit and think on what you've said some more. I thought it was very interesting..thank you for the reply Sometimes I get so weird |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
i like ur work nicely done i hope you write some more sweety i enjoy ur wurk peace out have a good week love dunphy aka scooby |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
thanks hun I hope you have a good week too Sometimes I get so weird |
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