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Bottle of Emotion (Repost from Teens #4)
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Bottle of Emotion (Repost from Teens #4) |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I just had to repost this - it brought back memeories, and it pretty much describes how I'm feeling lately  ~*~ Bottle of Emotion ~*~ I’m just a bottle of emotion And when my heart’s broken I can’t help but explode Into a mess of tears I’m just a bottle of emotion Ops, the cork flew off!! And now everyone knows That I’m not heartless And that I do feel pain And this hurts my heart I’m just a bottle of emotion Ops the cork flew off!! I let them see a part of me That I don’t like to share I didn’t want them to see How much pain I’m really in I’m just a bottle of emotion Ops the cork flew off!! They saw me in pain And all they did was laugh Which just made me cry harder But I had a friend by my side I’m just a bottle of emotion Ops the cork flew off!! I yelled a lil loud Said some words I didn’t mean They looked at me funny And laughed at my tears I’m just a bottle of emotion Ops the cork flew off!! It’s not my fault I couldn’t hold them back Don’t look at me like that I’ll just cry harder I’m just a bottle of emotion . . . If I held a star everytyme he made me smile,I'd have the evening sky in my palm, if one was removed for every tear he caused, I'd be emptyhanded. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I liked this the first time, and I like it the second time! Great read! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
unfortunatly i didn't read this when you posted it the first time and i'm happy i had an opportunity to read this one. when i read this i thought of myself. i'm a bottle ready to explode and i dont' like others to see me upset yet i know i'm not a heartless person. this was great and well writtin. i loved it. -ab *The heart is a house for love* |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this is a great poem, I liked it -C.M. |
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