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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-10-20 08:04 PM

She's got it all,
she's got it all.

The way that she moved caught my eye
there's something 'bout her I can't deny it,
she got the power to make me wick inside.
she got the looks to play with my mind.

The curve of her body,
and the lines of her face
she knockes me of my feet.

She's so,
lovable,
totally,
incredible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.
She's so,
beautiful,
completely,
natural,
irresisstible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.

she's the finest senorita
and if she wants to she'll getcha,
just one look from her eyes and I'm in love
just one look, she most be sent from above.

The curve of her body,
and the lines of her face,
she knockes me of my feet.

She's so,
lovable,
totally,
incredible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.
She's so,
beautiful,
completely,
natural,
irresisstible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.

She's so,
lovable,
totally,
incredible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.
She's so,
beautiful,
completely,
natural,
irresisstible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.

I'd give anything
to be with her just one night
til the very end
I'd hold her tight
I'd give her the world
'cause she's that kinda girl...

She's so,
lovable,
totally,
incredible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.
She's so,
beautiful,
completely,
natural,
irresisstible,
She's got it all,
she's got it all.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2001-10-20 09:58 PM

There was this girl at school that I felt that way about... Nancy... *purrs*

ANYWAY...

...very cool.. good luck with your "it" girl.

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2001-10-20 10:29 PM

Wow, this is great...the way it read I assumed that it would one day (or maybe it has already) be put to music.
It will make a kick ass song!

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-10-20 11:02 PM

I just love your work! You are so talented at writing songs! Wow!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2001-10-24 05:36 PM

i really liked this it was great

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

5 posted 2001-10-24 05:41 PM

wow thats like two songs i know put together and with some more UMPH
lol
when do i get my cd eh?

"If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-10-25 10:12 AM

This reminded me of "she bangs" by ricky martin...lol dont ask me why..i dunno!! I liked this poem a lot...flowed nicely

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

7 posted 2001-10-25 07:30 PM

it's so nice that you have found someone who you care about this much! it's great! and i'm happy for you. good job, i like it.

-ab

*The heart is a house for love*

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