Teen Poetry #5 |
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To the muse |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali ![]() |
Oh, muse Do tell me Of the time Long ago When we were Fresh and young With no Sorrow in Our hearts And our Eyes werent Old and tired Oh, muse Please tell me When we Were alive And life Was all new Oh, muse I must know I wrote this at five this morning, because of a dream I had. I hope you understand it.... |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I sort of understand it, but not really, but you know what? That's perfectly fine! It was a great read anyway! Thanks for sharing! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Lol, I must agree. I partially understand it, but for something written at 5 in the morning, this makes great sense, lol. Good write all the same. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This has deeper meaning than my tired mind at 2 o'clock in the afternoon can understand...please forgive me but i truely did appreciate the poem!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I'm sighing. Writing poetry used to be a lot easier. If your old muse breaks, get a new one. I'm done sighing now. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the desperate tone was enchanced in my opinion with the short verses(2/3 sybl)...went well together...i liked it. =) |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I hope you haven't lost your muse. Iliked this, if I did in fact understand it. If not, I would love to be enlightened. Dawn |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Aww. Yeah, I truely believe that you never lose your muse. Simply misplace it in all of your mind clutter. Wait it out ![]() Nice poem. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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