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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2001-10-14 12:07 PM


-walks in-    

-looks around-

-grins-


BLUE FLAMER

Silent
    Not a singe sound
Not one

Campfire
    Keeps quietly popping
Just us

Lighter
    Pulled from his pocket
Small flame

Flatulence
    Lit by the flame
Blue flamer

Laughter
    Pants are on fire
Stop, drop, roll

Passing
    Next person takes the lighter
My turn.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 10-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-14 12:11 PM


ROTFLMAO!!! Cody, that is SO bad! But funny in a deranged kind of way! I am DEFINATELY putting that into my library! Can I print it and put it in my locker?

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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2 posted 2001-10-14 12:11 PM


Forgot to put it in my library!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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3 posted 2001-10-19 03:00 AM


Different piece. Not really one that I like but nonetheless, it earns you enough for creativity.

Well done.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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4 posted 2001-10-19 08:36 AM


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!

This was such a cute piece!! LoL not what i expected at all!! Funny and cute   TWO THUMBS UP!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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