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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-09-28 05:56 PM

Let me feel the vibe
   in my body like fire.
Make me sense the touch
   in my brain like wine.
Show me you're real
   to keep my heart still.
And I would tell the world
   you're the reasons I live.

Take me on a trip
   to a place I've never been.
Fold me in your grip
   till I'm full to the brim.
Tell me you're pleased
   that your vacuum is filled.
Let these feelings be real
   and flow like never ending streams.

Hold me in your arms
   and kiss me on the cheek.
Keep me in your soul
   that I may feel relief.
Speak to me the words
   and mix them with my thoughts.
For only you I trust,
   without you I’m lost.

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-10-01 07:40 PM

Man, I just wish you were talking about me
This is really good
Unfortunately, I'm just dreaming

Beautiful words said on this piece
keep it up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-10-01 09:58 PM

Wow, this poem is a good one, Andrea! I can post again, at least replies, I haven't tried anything long yet, this PC sucks. lots been goin' on here and I THINK this poem sums up how I feel, for who, I'm not quite sure. We need to talk again! It's been a while.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-10-14 11:00 PM

Andrea!

WOWZERS!!!
*Huggles* This is BEAUTIFUL!
I'm HIGHLY Impressed! MORE! MORE I SAY!!
And Damnit! Get back in Teen! I miss you!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-10-19 03:20 AM

What a lovely piece, Andrea. I hope your husband understands just how much you love him. Such beauty. Wonderful.

Be proud.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-10-19 08:30 AM

Wow hun i really enjoyed this piece..it had a powerful message. Great job and keep up the awesome work! I love your poetry

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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