Teen Poetry #5 |
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God's Wonderful Grace |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Hey! I'm finally posting another poem. It's been like over a month... Anywho, this one is about the terrorist attacks and everything going on now/lately. Let me know what ya think! ![]() GOD'S WONDERFUL GRACE By God's wonderful grace I know everything will be alright Peace will be found in the world There will be no reason to fight With God's great love I know we will be okay Our hearts will be healed And we will forgive someday With God's awesome power The world will join forces To care for the hurting And bring forth his justice - Cody - |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like this one, and it is so true! I just hope that the rest of the world can figure it out! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive work. It's almost a challenge to me and to all. Perhaps some meter would do here. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned. We must behold our faith and you describe "God's wonderful love" very well! Thank you for sharing Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
this is a very true poem....i like it very much. also-i like ur "note to self" bc it just made me think for a lil bit, thanks Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the messege here and how it was delivered. Good job on the poem Cody ![]() "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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