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Teen Poetry #5

I'm crying the night away

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-10-14 08:54 PM

Verse 1:
My whole life was build
up around us two,
But then one cold night
I just, just lost you.
One minute your here
and the next your gone,
I know I am though
but I'm not that strong.

Lift:
you where always, there for me,
you always cared, for me.
It's hard to understand
that you're not here anymore.

Chorus:
I'm crying the night away ( 3x )
Thinking of the time we spend together.

Verse 2:
My live's a living hell
so much pain inside,
that I'd rather be dead
then to be alive.
Had that I never
got to say goodbye,
it's really eating me
up from inside...

Lift:
you where always, there for me,
you always cared, for me.
It's hard to understand
that you're not here anymore.

Chorus:
I'm crying the night away ( 3x )
Thinking of the time we spend together.
( 'til fade )

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

1 posted 2001-10-14 11:18 PM

That's very pretty. I loved it. Somebody call Mariah. . . it hit home in my heart, thanks for sharing

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