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Ree Ree Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56providence, RI |
Alone and in the dark, only looking for a light Lost and afraid, only looking for comfort Longing and lonely, only looking for love Wishing and hoping, only looking for a someone Wanting and searching, only to find nothing Waiting and comforting, only to still be alone Helping and caring, only to be left un cared for Loving and giving, only to be left unloved Alone and in the dark, to be left still searching for a someone |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know how this feels....very well written  |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Wow this sounds just like... ME! Haha I liked this a lot, it was very well done! Good job  ,Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
hey nice work :- |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was very nice. I hope you find who you are looking for. *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I can totally relate to this, Ree Ree. you did a wonderful job on expressing yourself. Nice read. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Awww, that's so sad! Aww, omg I don't know what to say to taht! Ughh, why are people put through such crap! Ughh, I wish I could help more than I do, but...ughh, nyway, thanks for writing that, it was a good poem. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one. Such a sad poem here. It was heart wrenching. I hope all is well with you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sad... Loneliness can be awful. I'm sorry you feel this way... be patient. And stay strong and smiling Nice work, I enjoyed this.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Very sad...I hope all gets better soon...remember to take it one day at at time... ~Nikki~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this hit home for me...this is how i exactly feel so many times for words to say...youe xpressed these feelings nicely. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"Wanting and searching, only to find nothing Waiting and comforting, only to still be alone Helping and caring, only to be left un cared for Loving and giving, only to be left unloved" I share your hurt Ree Ree These words just hit the spot *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Lonliness sucks but eventually you will find someone I know it.Anyway great poem and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
I can relate to this. Great job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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