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Teen Poetry #5

In a once in a lifetime

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-10-10 11:24 AM

Chorus:
In a once in a lifetime story,
I have your heart.
In a once in a lifetime worry,
I know my part.

Verse 1:
In the name of love baby I'm here,
to wipe away your every tear.
I am your bridge across the pain,
I'm your shelter from the rain.

Chorus:
In a once in a lifetime story,
I have your heart.
In a once in a lifetime worry,
I know my part.

Verse 2:
Girl I am your shoulder to cry on,
the one who keeps your love when it's gone.
I promise you this girl I swear,
whenever you need me I will be there.

Chorus:
In a once in a lifetime story,
I have your heart.
In a once in a lifetime worry,
I know my part.
( 2x )

Bridge:
Loving you, is all I wanna do,
together, forever, it's true.
( 3x )

Chorus:
In a once in a lifetime story,
I have your heart.
In a once in a lifetime worry,
I know my part.
( Until fade )

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-10-10 03:54 PM

Nice! This one is library material! I could see this being a song on the charts. Seriously, it IS good! It just needs another verse somewhere, and It'd be perfect.... but thats just my oppinion, ah well. It's still very good.

rolly_polly
Junior Member

since 2001-10-10

Posts 41
puerto rico

2 posted 2001-10-10 11:16 PM

hi! u did a great job on this =)......i'm new here and i just wanted to say that i've been reading up on yer work for a while, and yer very talented so keep em coming man!

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