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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
round round round we go where we stop we never know our destination is never the same life for us is one big game we are full of love, life, and pain. but there is always something for us to gain sometimes its friends, enimes ora foe but the bonds we share will always grow sometimes things drive us to cry other times we want to die we always have our head filled with crazy notions but we will always have overflowing emotions We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
srry bout the shortness, and the content, its DEFINATALLY not my best, its juss somethin my friends sn inspired me to write!! We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hey! Never apologize for the length of one of your poems!! I thought the content was fine... Never say it's not one of your best! Only I'm allowed to say that about my poems!  keep on writing!If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
good job...this is definitly true for everyone...overflowing emotions make life worth living! me |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
round round round we go where we stop we never know LoL those words are my life in a nut shell..i really liked this..awesome job! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, this was awesum kris, keep doin this....curious tho, who was this one about?  Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
WOW!!! I really liked this poel because it is so very true. Keep 'em coming  |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
hey thanks all and staci, its not really bout neone, do u kno mikel? well one of her sns is overflowin emotion so its sorta came from her name We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
I liked this it's cool. don't worry about the length of a poem sometimes the shortest poems are the most effective. good work, keep it up. "by takeing no risks you are really risking everything" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
nicely done krista....curse those emotions!  ...no ..where would we be without compassion and love and kindness?..good job on this one- i enjoyed the read very much! The day I stopped loving I died. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice piece, punk angel. You're right. There will always be these emotions and no one can actually take them away. You've highlighted some key aspects of life here. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing it. ~AF~ "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" Nelly Furtado - On the radio [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 10-10-2001).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This actually fits in really well with the song I'm listening to right now. Great poem! Bel |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
woah! very cool poem...and yeap so very true man....keep em coming!  |
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