Teen Poetry #5 |
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Reaching |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding ![]() |
Reaching into the dark corners of my mind Trying to find words to write I come to a block, a wall if you will I can't make the words flow from my pen So much is on my mind When I go to write, I'm illiterate Reading other work I wish I could write Even to have half the words of some, I'd be thankful I can write, it's been done before So many emotions to sift through, it all clugs up And turns the pen in my hand to stone And I reach again, looking for new words But to no avail... Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind". |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Writer's block is a real pain! ![]() Have no fear tho...just as it comes, it does eventually go. Nice write. ![]() Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice way of writing about writers block. it does go though and you get this huge surge. it you're patient, good things will come. ![]() Thanks for the read. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
you just described the story of most my life! good job me |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks for the support you guys... it just seems to me that I've had writer's block for the past 6 months! And then at 1:30 in the morning today I had a brilliant piece that I'll post in a minute! Thanks again! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
CURSE the part of the brain the blocks up and doesnt want you to write!!! ![]() good job on this one though sky...enjoyed it lots ![]() ![]() ![]() wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky? |
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