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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Well, i care for my girlfriend very deeply, but i haven't told her that i love her yet- And i don't want to frighten her by doing that or something... ya know? So i wrote this poem.. How hard is it to say, I love you I think it every day I love you In the morning when I wake I love you During school time at break I love you I don't think it by mistake I love you At night while I eat I love you During the evening, while I sleep I love you Like a fog light messaging a ship I love you That is how I think of it I love you I could say it every day I love you But im afraid it would scare you away I love you In this i think just one time is tough I love you So surely twelve times is tough -Nathan |
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pure_innocence Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 80Colorado, US |
That is so cute and sweet. She'll love it, or at least I would, (had I ever been fortunate enough to have such a caring poetic boyfriend) *sigh* Sweet and sincere with a touch of humor, coulnd't be better. Good luck!!! And by the way, great write!!!  How rude I am!!!! Welcome to the forums, to the family, it's great to have talent like you join our "family of friends"!!!! Hope you enjoy it!!!! [This message has been edited by pure_innocence (edited 09-28-2001).] |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
EEEEHHH!!!! *is a hopeless romantic* That is soo sweet! I'm sure she'll love it! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome Nathan! This is great!Please check your email for a special greeting |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
  WELCOME nathan i am a girl and if my bf was to say i love you i would be so happy to hear thoose words! anyways no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy* [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 09-28-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nathan...OMG TELL HER!!! She'll love to hear it from you especially if you mean it Its so nice to have you join us and keep the poems comin! You did a great job on your first post... WELCOME! |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
WELCOME THE "OTHER" WORLD heheheheh well ilike this it was really cute your Gal must be very lucky!!  [IMG]http:// netpoets.net/img/p03.gif[/IMG]  [IMG]!~Andrea~! *You only live once, so live it to the fullest* *what is love?* *If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l [This message has been edited by Read_what_i_write (edited 09-28-2001).] |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
hehe, thanks a lot for the compliments to the post It really helped boost my confidence on resiteing it to her Perhaps i will tell you the outcome of the event after i say it to her, hehe. You peeps seem like really nice, well, people Its a pleasure to post poetry on a community such as thisThanks again- -Nahtan "Like the sun without the moon, so is a relationship with devotion." - Me "A poem should be written one time and from the heart, not the mind." - Me "What use is your heart If you can't put it into words What use is your heart If you can't share it with the one you love Don't waste your gift Given to you by the creater from above" - Me |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
If you find it hard to say it, give her the poem. If she's like any normal girl she'll either, A) burst into tears, or B) burst into tears. Welcome to Passions! Can't wait to read more! Mr T trusts me with coaching the Jr. Girls rugby team. What was he THINKING?!?!?! |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey that was an awesome poem!! Very cute and sweet.. I know if I were the person you were giveing it to you would get tons of kisses i would love it!! Haha thanks for sharing it made my day! Always, Amanda  |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwwww so very cute! I hope it all works out the way you want. She's a lucky girl. WELCOME to pip!!! Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
I just realised an error when i re-read it  im so bummed i missed it beforeIt should have been so surely twelve times is enough |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great first poem it is very sweet you should give it to you girlfriend.But anyway keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions!! Nice first post for us all. The overall theme was good and you wrote about it pretty well. I hope to see you posting AND replying in here. Remember to reply as much as you decide to post. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Good ol Pip... Well done on the poem. I really thought you did a good job. Sweetly written.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice too see you deciding to join us here in PIP. We can always use more poets in here. Hope you enjoy reading and sharing. And enjoy the friendships in this place Everyone is beautiful in and out hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is so cute, welcome to passions a great first post of many I hope. Check out Teen chat in the discussions section to get to know people. Anyway keep up the good work "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
you know what? i actually read the thing with the last line saying "so surely twelve times is enough" and thought to myself that twelve would not be enough and then read your reply half way down saying that you made a mistake and then read it as "tough"...so yeah either my brain is super smart or super dumb to do that  great poem nathan! i enjoyed it heaps!wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky? |
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