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pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-10-05 12:21 PM

     cracked beneath
         the window
   shines
       night     life
         you dance a
    dream and
        come full cycle

                 me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-05 09:49 AM

"you dance a dream and come full cycle"

wow, I like this VERY much!

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-05-2001).]

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-10-06 11:41 PM

This reminds me of a wedding I went to last night.
Thanks for the read. Much enjoyed.

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-10-07 02:26 AM

i liked this one very much...well done

If you dont reply to OTHER peoples poems,are targets(peoplewillburnyourhouseinfuriousrage)*ahem*we dont want to put that title on our foreheads,do we?

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

4 posted 2001-10-07 03:49 AM

thanx you guys for the reply's!

me

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-10-08 12:09 PM

with so few words you managed to paint a really vivid picture in my head...dacing in the moonlight, and maturing at the same time. thank you for this, i enjoyed it greatly

wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-10-17 12:15 PM

I can really see that your style has changed. You did well here, but it wasn't my favorite. it was deeply read by me, though, and I did appreciate it for what it meant.
nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-18 10:18 AM

This sounds so magical

) Nice

)

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-10-18 10:18 AM

lol whoops

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 10-18-2001).]

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