Teen Poetry #5 |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
make only who we know speak about after almost always never love me |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I don't understand this one, maybe you could shed some light on it for me?? It sounds really cool, I just don't know what you mean here. ![]() |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
to be perfectly honest, it's hard to describe this one... me |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The feeling I am getting from this is you are writing about the feelings of love (obviously) however because of a situation, you wrote the piece in a tricky fashion because that is exactly what love is to you. OK probably way off base on that one but it's what it read like. Thanks for the read. ![]() ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hmmm...interesting, enjoyed this piece as always ![]() If you dont reply to OTHER peoples poems,are targets(peoplewillburnyourhouseinfuriousrage)*ahem*we dont want to put that title on our foreheads,do we? |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
AF...actually you weren't off base at all...you just put into words what i couldn't ...thanx...and thanx to the rest of you for your reply's. me |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
you know i think you ar the only person i know who can put a few words together in a string and somehow make it cohere!...its a nice little read i loved the way the words flowed ( alomost on top of one another ) with :about,after,almost & always and then sorta halted with "never". and i had the same feeling Af had about love being a confusing thing where you and it are concerned. i think you did it pretty well. good job on the poem thanks for sharing ![]() ![]() ![]() wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Weirdo hehe.....but I really liked this one. it even confused me a bit, but I got it....obviously about love and Liz's little explanation helped a bit....I think you portray raw emotion very well.....cryptic at times, yet meaningful. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I like poems like this but i dont understand it so much...then again im like half asleep lol ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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