Teen Poetry #5 |
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ramblings. pure ramblings. |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz ![]() |
i've noticed that my poetry stands out quite a bit here. [it's new and intriguing apparently] heh. oh well, that's the way i write, that's the way i like to write. ::grins::
so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I think that I love it! It kinda reminds me of an episode of friends...."lightning bearers that steal wind from us godesses..." ![]() ![]() Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Yes I do remember the day and I want the music back!! ![]() now being serious for a moment, I do like this piece. I can connect with it (what's new??) and it's a good write. Well done. Thanks for the read. ![]() ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Yeah new and intriguing (sp?) A great piece of work, short, sweet and very precise one for the library me thinks... "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I think I like... I think it's intriuging... I think it's very... original... I think YOU are a very original person yourself to be able to write poetry that is so totally non-mainstream! Keep it up, I look forward to more! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
LOVED it! of course i do have something for those short poems!! good job me |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
the reason why your poetry seems to stand out is because you leave so many avenues for the mind to think ![]() [This message has been edited by Anonymousfemale (edited 01-01-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautiful!!!! I hope they give u the stars back...This was sad but very good! |
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