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lil_pwheeler
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

0 posted 2001-09-28 03:05 PM

Drowning in
My own word
Hiding beneath
A false world

Listening to
A silent scream
I have lost
My hopes and dreams

I have to leave
I need to go
They ask whats wrong
They oughta know

I missed the one
A friend has gone
I miss the touch
I waited too long

Alone im sitting here
My life has ceased
I need help
Help me Jesus

No one dies a virgin, life screws us all

[This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (edited 09-28-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-09-29 01:07 AM

You seem to be headed in the right direction
Your last line tells me that

Hope you stay strong and do look for His help
You know, He'll never let you down
Thanks for sharing

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anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-30 01:18 PM

Hmm...you could always look inside yourself too to find that inner peace. If your feelings get any worse than this, maybe you could also see a professional....Like a Dr.
Anyway, I hope you find what you're looking for.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-09-30 11:47 PM

Great poem I loved it!
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-01 11:08 AM

WoW this poem was chocked full of emotion..i really enjoyed it!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-10-14 10:49 PM

Kudos! Loved the emotion and desperation in this piece!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

6 posted 2001-10-14 11:30 PM

Great poem

I like the last line especially, it allows for reassurance- You seek Jesus, He will answer, and He will help you get through it.

-Dreys
Yay!

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

7 posted 2001-10-15 06:45 PM

Great work here. It's almost like it's a double meaning - addressed both to a close friend and to Christ. The poem puts its message across fantastically!

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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