Teen Poetry #5 |
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For The First Time |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
Whenever I think about you, my heart starts to race, and I get all jumpy inside. I think that's kind of funny, because you don't even know me, but maybe someday you will. When I saw you for the first time, my heart just crumbled, just because of the way you were. You're not the most handsome, that's not why you caught my eye, it was just the way you're always smiling. You're not the smoothest one, that's what caught my eye, you just make life up as you go. When I heard your voice for the first time, It was sweeter than sugar, and it melted me instantly. It's not a "manly" voice, an intimidating, hollow nothing, it's a sweet whisper amongst a crowd. It's just the sweetest thing, that my ears have heard and I wanted you to know. For the first time in a long time, someone I don't even know has melted me, and I seem to like the feeling. I think it's funny, because I don't even know you, I don't even know your name. this isn't about Justin! Sugarpie313 married my poem! (that's my poem, not your poem! pooh!) |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great piece Allysa. I felt as though I knew where you were going with this poem. I could relate to it. Well keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
I know the feeling. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i liked this poem!!! i really did .. keep it up so i have somemore to read!!! !~Andrea~! |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Very Cute sis! so who is this mystery guy? Justins cuz? "Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!" |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Justin's cuz is a mystery guy, but not this one. Justin's cuz AJ might be going to a concert with me, tho. And the mystery guy's name is: UNKNOWN. I haven't gotten the guts to ask him yet. I gave him a nickname though, and that's Creamy Goodness. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmm Allysa, you're falling for someone else now? You Go Girl "It's not a "manly" voice, an intimidating, hollow nothing, it's a sweet whisper amongst a crowd" These lines are wonderful great lines thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ahh lol how alike we r...i liked a guy last year for a really really long time...i didnt find him attractive even...just intruiging...i ended up getting to know him and finding out he wasnt as glorious and mysterious as i thought but we still talk ![]() |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Very nice poem ![]() -Nathan |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Hey guys LOVE it when a girl hits on them. Go for it. And Good Luck. ![]() Ex Animo, Aaron |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Awww, heheh, very nice Poem, I enjoyed it a lot. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
WHAT!?!?! Not about Justin?!?! Goodness...I HAVE been gone awhile...lol... I need to catch up...hehe Nice write, Deary...Glad to hear you've found someone new. Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Okay, his name would be...... unknown still. I met him at the skating rink, and he is the AWESOMEST rollerskater ever known. OMG>> He dances like you would never believe it.. He came up to me, or I came up to him, or something, and we grinded for approx. 10 seconds, but still..... Argh... Oh, and Justin's a pain. |
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