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Patty o'brien New Member
since 2001-10-07
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Here is my idea of a friend lst grade Gies you their cookie when you drop yours at snack time 2nd grade Give you the red crayon so you dont have to use the ugly brown one 3rd Grade Tells you its ok when you get scared at your first sleepover away from home 4th grade Gets off the bus to wait with you when you miss your bus 5th grade Gives you their own time to listen about your parents breaking up 6th grade Carrys your books when you break your leg 7th grade Goes up to your secret crush to see if she like you 8th grade Jokes with you about who will be first shoved into a locker in high school 9th grade Tells you he really knows where you class is just to make it seem like he isnt completely lost 10th grade Drives you home when he reliezes you are to drunk to even stand 11th Goes to a tux shop with you to get both your tuxs for your first prom 12th Starts cring with joy and hugs you after he finishes his validictorian speach [This message has been edited by Patty o'brien (edited 10-07-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! I liked this, very real  Please check your email for a special greeting! ~SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions and I like your entrance.Well done! Charisma |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to passions, I hope you enjoy your stay here, may I suggest going to Teen Chat in the discussion area as it well help you get to know people and possibly get more replies... anyway great solid poetry Zu |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Can I say "How true"??? Awesome idea of a friend... reminded me of my own best friend! Welcome to Passions, and I hope you keep posting! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions!! Ahh friendship. It's a decent thing to have. Your first piece is very thought provoking and has actually inspired me to some degree. It brought back memories. Painful but still, they should be looked at once in a while. Thanks for the read. I hope you enjoy it here as much as we do and that you find whatever you're looking for in life. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
welcome to passions  (your proberly sick of hearing that by now).This is such an awesome poem very true aswell, well done. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME!!!! This was such an awesome piece!! I've never seen one quite like this before!! It was cute, real, touching and sad all in one...Absolutely amazing job here..you made me a fan already!! LoL WELCOME!!!! |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
WELCOME!!!! great way to portray a friend. It's so true! It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was pretty inspiring. I really liked it a lot. You did this very well. Welcome to Passions.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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