Teen Poetry #5 |
Falling Apart |
TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
The mystic skys with moons a many I look up far towards them The stars are shinning knowing unwillingly that they will eventually extinguish And now the sun So warm and bright Without it, it only leads to endless night So we must harness its power and marvel at its beauty For without the big bright star of fire Life would only be a desire if not a figment of imagination Life would discontinue Time would finally stop And all the gates of heaven would crumble Yet the gates would still be open Its like wisemen they a many have said the road to heaven is always available and the journey to God is never too late to start Even hell would feel this wrath It would freeze over And life would freeze with the completion of this dark cycle Leavin nothing in its path No present, not a future Life is over This journey is so brutle [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 09-21-2001).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey, I noticed this lonely post so i read it, and im very glad i did! Very nice poem!!! "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem very well written. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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