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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL 
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10:14 PM I wrote this one night when I was half asleep... So it's not my best...  6/5/01 Jessica The colors of our love paint a magnificent portrait Filling every empty space of paper with yerning desires Wanting the slightest feeling to be noticed, We add brilliant shades of red to accent our emotion. The dark shadows on the wall remind me of your beautiful soul Delicate & true, but yet still untouchable Cherished thoughts bring dreams of the future You can't hide what you feel, you can't touch what you know We have to stay strong, to finish what we've started We cannot part, our hopes have now combined I will love you always... My heart says this is true As long as you care, there will not be a doubt in the world You & I can only grow together now Leaving our shattered pasts behind Starting something precious & new You have a friend in me, I will never let you down Nor forsake you & abandon you in an ocean of sorrow My doors are always open to you... No matter the place or time You have captured me & taken me whole Through the eyes I have never seen Through the touch I have never felt & through every thought that comes dancing into my mind This I just felt you should know & I hope you take my words close & dear to you heart... Just as I have done your's... I love you... What don't kill you can only make you stronger... [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow Jessica... I thoroughly enjoyed this. It was absolutely beautiful. Just beautiful. You do great at free verse. Keep posting. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is beautiful! The greatest verse I've written is half asleep! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This poem rocks! Your words are very beautiful, Jessica. This is such a sweet poem, and deserving of what you obviously have with this person. The line that really stuck out for me was, "You can't hide what you feel, you can't touch what you know" <- that line's awesome.. really got me thinking. You really did a wonderful job with the imagery, and the descriptive language. Excellent work. I really enjoyed this. I hope to see more soon --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome job on writing this...very well done!...this was just beauftiufl...so much beautty in teh words you wrote here...and i REALLY liked this poem in every verse i was reading ...hope to see more...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Thanks everybody... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awesome job here. I really enjoyed this poem Jessica.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"You can't hide what you feel, you can't touch what you know" This is so beautiful OMG, This person must really be very special ~*stands up and applauds*~ this is totally amazing great job Jessica "My doors are always open to you... No matter the place or time You have captured me & taken me whole Through the eyes I have never seen Through the touch I have never felt & through every thought that comes dancing into my mind This I just felt you should know & I hope you take my words close & dear to you heart... Just as I have done your's... I love you..." I love this ending has a strong kick to it keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare [This message has been edited by acire (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sorry for the second post...have to add it to my library  hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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