Teen Poetry #5 |
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Let Me |
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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
The world has gone on so fast. People quickly going in and out of my life. Never really knowing any of them. While none of them even knowing me. But that doesn't matter now. I don't even matter. If this is how life will always be, It's just way too fast for me. For once can i slow down the hands of time. Let me enjoy more everyday than before. Let me expericnce more in my lifetime. Let me feel what it's like to live. Let me see how I can be when set free. Just for one moment in my life, Let me be me. Poetry is not just words on paper that may rhyme, but words that are from your heart expressing yourself for others to see from your eyes. |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
i like your signature especially. and i feel what you are saying in this poem. i know what that's like. but for me, its like.... this isn't my REAL life anyways. anyways, have a great day. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
That was a very heart-breaking poem... well it was for me. Great emotion was what I caught from this poem. I've been there, and the days never ever slow down... when they start slowing down, that's when it becomes boring. Keep writing! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful emotions expressed here...i related to it & hit me hard...i liked this poem a lot ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-01-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This poem was wonderful. I have felt this way too many times. Great job! *Amanda* |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a great poem! The message is awesome... there are so many people who go through life never asking the question "Let me be me?" And end up miserable. Thanks for sharing this poem with us! This is something I think everyone should read. In the first stanza, I read the line, "I don't even matter." I hope you know that's not true... everyone is someone to somebody. The second stanza really made me smile... realizing all this will get you far. Nice work! I thoroughly enjoyed this, and look forward to reading more.. soon, I hope ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Thanks for the read Michael. This is a great poem that I'm sure alot of people will be able to relate to. Keep posting. I enjoyed it. ![]() |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
We all wish for that. More often we are the greatest obstacle on achieving this. Very good piece! |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh wow...so true. Keep looking on the bright side...lol if there is one. Great poem. Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one. I liked the way it was written. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Only you have the power to make you, you. I loved the idea of the poem remember what I just said...only you can do it ![]() Thanks for sharing Thanks for the great read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
"let me be me" i like that ![]() *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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