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TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-09-18 07:57 PM

I sit here remembering the times we spent together
So to you I write this love letter
Tell me why you left me all alone
In pain
I sit here remembering those lonely nights you kept me warm
I sit here remembering the passion you showed me when you sang to me
So tell me why you left me all alone
In pain

This pain runs deep
Within my soul
Within my heart
Within my mind
Within my blood
This pain I can no longer take
I sit here remembering those precious memories they hurt so much
I sit here just remembering those times we had
In pain
I sit here remembering

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2001-09-19 04:50 PM

awwwww how cute...im sorry....
very good piece though...

"I swear officer! It was PINK."

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-09-19 05:53 PM

I know that one. I hate that when you dwell on a situation like this. all it does is bring the painful memories back around to kick you in the butt. I hope all gets better.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-09-29 01:13 AM

Unfortunately, we all have t go thru this in life. I know it's not easy, but stay focused and stay strong. Hope things do get better for you. Thanks for the read.

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anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-09-30 01:23 PM

Very sad but these experiences make us the people we are. Give it time for the wound to heal and the progression to begin. You'll get through it. Keep strong and things will work out fine.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

5 posted 2001-09-30 01:29 PM

A good write, you can feel the emotions in it which is good

Im sorry for you though; life is tough in many situations, perhaps the toughest in that of love. But as a song says:
"Love is the dance of life"
and as i add a line to that

You don't get better at dancing unless you embarass yourself. - You have to think on it to get it in the sense i ment, because its not the sense that would instantly come to mind.

-Nathan

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2001-09-30 11:38 PM

Very sad poem but we all go through what your going through and sooner or ater it will get better.Buy anyway I love this poem and keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-01 11:11 AM

aww hunny im sorry..this was so sad!! ::hugs::

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