Teen Poetry #5 |
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Once in a life time |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
A friend is loyal To the end and back They stab you in the front Not in the back When you break up With the one you loved They hug you and listen Your friend from above A true friend Is once in a lifetime Talking, seeing movies They always have time From riding bikes To driving cars From crushes to true loves You and your friend from above You can not define a friend By a poem or a ryme Cuz' a true friend is Once in a lifetime No one dies a virgin, life screws us all |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yeah, those kind of friends aren't easily found but when you do, hold on ![]() ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you describe true friendship so well... like it a lot!! Charisma |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
If you have a friend like that you should feel llucky because a lot of people don't.But anyway I loved this poem and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
"Cuz' a true friend is Once in a lifetime" I loved that. Cool poem and very true ![]() Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really liked this one! So true... You said it very well. Good job! - Cody - |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really nice piece. People like this are rare but when you find them, you feel great for it. Take care and thanks for sharing. ![]() ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
very good!!!! i like your signature too! LOL "Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!" |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
"Once in a lifetime" that is so, so true Great poem here ![]() Sarah *the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I really love your descriptions of a true friend. It put a smile in my face. thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahhh i loved this poem it was really good!! Theres on thing i dont agree w/tho..u said true friends dont stab you in the back but instead in the front, i dont think true friends should stab u at all... ![]() |
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