Teen Poetry #5 |
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Forever |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Forever Is there a forever? If so my friend and I wouldn’t be graduating If so we’d still be on the phone or online Forever we all wish to have but we don’t always get what we want We always think, “Forever would be so great full” But forever is in a dream Minna July 1, 2001 Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"But forever is in a dream" beautiful ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Hmmm... Is there a forever?... I could go on about this ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"Forever is a dream" How true, how true. Good write! Rhonda ![]() "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
I skipped my senior graduation ceremony... but i remember leaving all my friends at my overseas private k-9 school i went to, and that was tough, especially since i had to start at my sophmore year at high school that i realized i didn't know how to make friends.... xscoutx |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I was late for graduation. Anyhow, i know how this one feels. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I believe there is such a thing as forever. And I do believe, based on reading your other poems, your love for your dad will last forever. I know the poem is not about your dad, but I just wanted to bring up a point. Be strong Minna. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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