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DYME
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since 2000-07-29

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Texas

0 posted 2001-06-23 03:07 PM

I'm Proud of You **5/18/01**

I just wanted you to know
I'm proud of you
When things get rough
You keep your head up
You hit a road block
But never get discouraged
Things may go wrong
But you always keep your smile
When people test you
You keep your cool and move on
You never change yourself
When people criticize you
That's why I'm proud of you
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No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-06-23 03:11 PM

aww this was a good poem i liked it a lot

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-06-23 03:29 PM

This would make a sweet card.

If I were you I'd buy this person a nice card and write this poem in it, give it to them. That would brighten anyone's day.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2001-06-23 04:21 PM

I agree with Allan this would make a great message for a card

A great read and thanx for sharing.
Zu

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

4 posted 2001-06-23 05:19 PM

yes, very nice

Fading Away

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5 posted 2001-06-23 06:41 PM

This is very sweet. These words are touching... Nice work. I enjoyed this.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

6 posted 2001-06-23 07:32 PM

aawww!

Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardeil *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

DYME
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

7 posted 2001-06-23 08:51 PM

Thank you, guys. The person I wrote this for does mean a lot to me. And as you can see I'm very proud of them.

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-06-23 09:00 PM

DYME-
very nice thoughts...

much enjoyed..

smiles,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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9 posted 2001-06-24 12:01 PM

great job on writing this

...i liekd it what meanings this had behind it...bye

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-24-2001).]

Acies

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Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-06-24 03:44 PM

beautiful words DYME
thanks for the wonderful read
keep sharing

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

obscurity of cloud
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....:::::******:::::....

11 posted 2001-06-24 10:44 PM

awwwwwwwwwwww....what a nice warm fuzzy feeling...

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

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land of cheese (Wisconsin)

12 posted 2001-06-25 05:18 AM

eh...i liked this poem. i wish i could be like that during problems in life! good work.
-fear-

"I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL

DYME
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

13 posted 2001-06-25 11:32 AM

Thank you for your nice words everyone.

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

14 posted 2001-06-25 08:03 PM

awwww, that is really cute!!! I like this...and I know several ppl I could send it to....

thank you!!!!!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

15 posted 2001-06-27 12:04 PM

Awww hey I liked this poem a lot. You really expressed yourself truly. Very nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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Limbo

16 posted 2001-06-28 05:55 AM

Nice piece DYME. Whoever this is written for must be very strong. You've written it well and it is a lovely dedication to someone.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

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Resting in my cardboard box.

17 posted 2001-07-05 01:31 AM

Such a nice read DYME. I hope you showed this to the person. It was so sweet.

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