Teen Poetry #5 |
Kris & Stace-Best Friends Forever!! |
stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
August of my freshman year I was late to my 2nd period class my mind was filled with fear I prayed for it to pass One day I was sick and I stayed home from school the insults were really thick they were all being so cruel except for you with your long brown hair your kind eyes and gentle smile you told me what they said just wasn't fair I just knew we'd be friends for awhile Two months of a story book friendship Then suddenly a rift in our lives we were ripped apart by betrayal it stabbed me like thousands of knives Ten months later we're back on track we're better friends as a matter-of-fact Thirteen more months of a story book friendship we're "bestest friends" forever till the end! SIDENOTE------> hey Kris, SKYDIVER!!!!!!!!!! oh yeah, and the chone is chaking me!! the choke is chaining me!! heehee (inside jokes you guys) -->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great tribute to your friend. There were a few places where the flow and meter were off, but the message behind the poem was great! *Amanda* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
aww...this was sweet...great tribute to kris...i liked the poem..and hope you guys stay that way for a loooong time ...thansk for sharing it...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is so cute, Stace. Kris will LOVE it. It's just so nice and a great way to show your friendship. ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is SUCH a cute tribute! I really enjoyed this.. The fact that you two overcame a rift in the friendship that was serious enough to cause a break for a year shows that you two obviously have a close bond. Cherish that! Friends are the best... This is so sweet, and I know she appreciates this. Nice work! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Awww, Stace!!!!! *hugs* thanx sissy!!! We did overcome a lot of bad times, and I'm glad that we are as good of friends as we are! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
~*BUMP*~ I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Such a sweetie... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad to see you're both going strong as friends. I think I do have an idea on what caused the stabbing pain oh well, great job Stace hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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