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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
A silence within so hidden from eyes My soul within screams and crys Inside starving for comfort a peace of mind It feels like I have left myself behind Can't controll these feelings inside wating for when they start to subside No emotions shown hidden is how it will remain Struggles and anger of pain Feelings noone understands noone knows My feelings are hidden, nothing shows A darkness over comes me within Im tired of trying, It hurts deep within Never happy with these eyes Inside and out I despise Never happy with this skin A darkness over comes me within Hating myself, Noone knows why Hating myself, lost tears, I cry Not caring for me, stoped that long ago walk alone,and noone would know Use to alone,numb to the feelings of good I want things back, like the way they should Ignored,alone,lonley ill be Invisable for the eye to see Existing in a nothing world with noone around My soul is lost, and needs to be found Why can't this be normal, snap out of it now All I can think is, yeah right,how? Waiting to be pulled out of this sorrow Hoping that day will be tomorow I smile on without a flaw without a crack I want my happiness I lost, I want it back I continue lieing to myself,nothing is wrong I continue saying I just dont belong I try and try but the efort is forseen All this can me so cruel harsh and mean I try and try but the outcome is blank I have fallen out of life, out of rank |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Lisa this is sincere cry...you have poured yourself in this piece...VERY emotional and sad...i can relate to this...  hope ALL gets better, soon...someday you'll see what we all await to see...stay strong. if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really very emotional talking about pouring you heart out *hugs* hope things go well hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
"Never happy with this skin A darkness over comes me within Hating myself, Noone knows why Hating myself, lost tears, I cry" - I like this a lot and I'm relating so much to this poem. Good job... If you need to talk I'm here. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wow...what a piece. *hugs* I know how you feel. Remember though that you have the power to make the sun rise the next day and you have the choice to stay the way you are or get help. Take care of yourself. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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flyaway New Member
since 2003-03-19
Posts 1 |
hey! i like this poem no no wait i love this poem!! i have writen peices like this before i know how you feel and it sucks a lot but don't worry things will get better i promise!! lots and lots of love!! ~Emily~ keep strong and keep smiling! (i know easier said then done but try babe try!!!) |
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electricdreamz New Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 1 |
hey...excellent. after along time im reading such an emotional poem. every word here has been sculpured than written... |
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