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Dark Army |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
Gettin down and dirty, Pick it up around 1:30. Get side tracked and left, To take the blame for their theft. Across the back get slapped, Nowhere to go just trapped. Prowling in the night, Keeping out of sight. Hunter of the darkest wild, Makes you feel just like a child. Hit me high hit me low, Doesn't matter where you go. Vengance is a must see, Soul decayed and crusty. Dreams are my unicorn, True and unborn. Creature of the night, Crept and got slapped out of spite. Darkness rules this place, Darkman stares you in the face. Colnel of the Dark Tank, Not hesitant to pull rank. Certified head busters, Sits down and musters. Another bad creation of sort, Your ship pulls into port. Time to go say goodbye, For you just told your last lie. Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was awesome very work. Very well written. contained lots of power.!!! Regina |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Great writing, Kyle. Mind you, the same thing came across in this..the meter. Seriously do a revision of it because when you get it running smoothly, it'll be a master piece.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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