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Mysterious Ways |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
Blind to the facts, Stabbing rage with tacks. Same people up in your face, That'll rush up in your place. Take the time solve the mystery, Or take your place in history. Friends say you're not there, I know you're here somewhere. Just opened your own "town", Run up in there and shut it down. Trying to take over move out instead, Hold you up by a thin little thread. Thinking you're strong, But for how long... Trying to walk the line, Can't and will never walk mine. Just one more rhyme, One last time. Some day you'll se things my way, Then look at me what will you say? Just one more time I'll be history, Pick up the pieces solve the mystery.... Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds kinda like a Limp Bizkit song....I like it  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
hey it does too Sea. Too bad Limp are sell outs though  This had a pretty good flow all the way through and a great message in it also. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing! ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Thinking you're strong, But for how long... Trying to walk the line, Can't and will never walk mine." I liked this one bunches, Kyle. The flow was awesome! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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