Open Poetry #14 |
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A Whisper's Arrest (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Arrest- through my ears, into my breast Softness siezes me |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
well heck...where have you been???? this is a beautiful comeback. don't stay away so long next time. K? May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This one strikes at my spirit tonight..in a softer way. Enjoyed. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely image! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
arresting whispers soft against my ear I hear this love of your near |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
had to read this again, it really is simply lovely. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
whisper's arrest... very cool combination of words here... ![]() |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I do have a love of these when done well, and yours always are. ![]() Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"A Whisper's Arrest- through my ears, into my breast Softness siezes me" --------------- A whisper arrests with powers unseen a gentleness that touches thee a softness that enchants and a loveliness that would always hold thee --------------- Looooooooved it........ three soft tilting lines that beckon magically Thank you for them ************************ It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah, softness seizes me once in awhile too....great write! |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
Really nice. |
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