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Open Poetry #14

Casting

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-11 10:27 AM

Arched Stone spanning
Silver blue sparkles
Of movement
Above rainbow
And brown
Lying eddy
Still

Casts deep shadows
On sand long carved
Pools green deep
As I cast along
Edges swirling
Chaotic among
Boulders washed
From past floods

Arched line spanning
Fulfillment and hope
Falls gentle on
Currents running
Long before there
Were words to
Contemplate

And as the drift
Carries feathered color
Over wary minds
How can I help
But strike
A thought

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-11 10:30 AM

Sounds of Arizona or New Mexico come to mind in this panoramic piece....

excellent in all ways....this is marvelous!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-11 10:46 AM

too magnificent...it peaks my desire to be beside a stream, or in it at the edge, casting out my wishes to be pescine fed

oooh, I can see it so clearly, this experience you share

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

3 posted 2001-06-11 01:59 PM

BiG SIGH! Sounds like the ocean to me and waves cast shadows long before sand. Well, I enjoyed this and just had to read it a few times. Thank you for your words.

Hugs!

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