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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2001-06-03 01:53 PM

There Came A Searing Sun
~*Marge Tindal*~

Across a cool crisp morning dew
there came a searing sun
blazing thoughts of you
across a day begun
across a day begun
singeing edges of renew
there came a searing sun
branding sweetest memories anew

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

1 posted 2001-06-03 01:58 PM

ahhhhh, AMORE! Wish I could get some more...lol...inspirationally to those of us looking for someone like that which you describe...thanks

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-03 01:58 PM

oh how you do turn a phrase poetess MT ...
and we're so glad you do

I'm not right ... you're not wrong ...
Still I dont know ... what this love of ours is built upon.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-06-03 02:34 PM

Marge,
I didn't think you could get any better. BUT YOU DID. *L* Sy

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-06-03 02:41 PM

embrace sun's rising
cling to love as if dancing
abate the cold moon

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-06-03 02:47 PM

Okay...that looks like an anvil, right? Atta girl Marge, I kinda like that idea, branding our men! he he - beautiful write now I will be serious.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-06-03 05:22 PM

Ah yes...this likes me so very much, it followed me to my library...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-06-03 05:25 PM

I love this, Margie, beautiful!

~Tier

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-03 06:43 PM

Marge I love how you've got the pain and the memories starting at the break of day when consciousness arrives to greet the day.....wonderful writing my dear poet lady!

Love that SEARING sun!

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-06-03 07:19 PM

Ahhh, Marge, once again you have done it, very nice with the pic to back it up...gentle smile

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

10 posted 2001-06-03 07:26 PM

Wonderful thank you for the read(B)
A lovely scene

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät(F)

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2001-06-03 07:35 PM

Margie girl, if I didn't have one of your gems to illuminate my nights I'd be lost. I love this one it's soooooo super. Absolutely first class writing as always Margie girl you are The poetess Kari is right you are multifarious, and each single one of them are brilliant.
Take care
Love as always
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 06-03-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

12 posted 2001-06-03 08:28 PM

Love it

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-06-03 09:44 PM

Rodney~
?  Appreciate the read.

JanetMarie~
Thank you, hon.

Seymour~
You're a doll !

Julian~
Lovely poetic response.

Mysteria~
YOU ?  Serious ?     LOL !
Thanks always, gal !

Karilea~
Thank you so much, dear sweet lady.

Tiersdin~
I'm really pleased you enjoyed it.

ETHome~
  Interesting interpretation, my friend.
Always glad to get a response from you.

Logan~
I am glad to know you liked 'it' !

MAC~
Thank you.

MarshaLove~
You know me so well, love.
I thank you and Karilea for your support.

KelliKay~
Nice to know you you like it.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

14 posted 2001-06-03 10:04 PM

What a enjoyable reading this is.

Thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

15 posted 2001-06-03 11:23 PM

Marge, your work is so very amazingly beautiful to me. I look forward to reading yours.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

16 posted 2001-06-04 03:30 AM

One never tires of your wonderful work Marge!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2001-06-09 12:34 PM

Titia~
It is most enjoyable to share it with you.

Saunni~
Thank you so much my friend.

EagleOne~
You are a doll !
It is really nice to see you, friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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