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Dance Lightly
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Dance Lightly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dance Lightly ~*Marge Tindal*~ Twirl me ~ swirl me spin me around Dance me 'cross stars Milky Way bound Stairway to Heaven flit gossamer wings All of the pleasures that loving you brings I will dance lightly across your heart forever in love never to part ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
oh, I love this. great flow, terrific rhythm... yep, I really liked this. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
beautifully done. Joyce |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Just the life I needed tonight....closed my eyes and saw the dance, thanks Marge~  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely romantic visions cast with your pen. Wonderful write. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ Appreciate that you enjoyed it. Joyce~ Thanks bunches ! GreenEyes~ A light little piece of fluff to get your toes to tapping !  PoeMinister~ Just a little pick-me-upper. Glad to know you like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! In the "forever", my friend... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Such a cleverly conceived dance. I'm relly impressed with the color changes throughout the lines. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I can hear the music and loved the dance. thanks and s,iles atcha, Koko |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This sings like a soft song, just so lovely and exuberant! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Someone is missing Cowboy....this seems so reminiscent of his writings.... and if not, why then, a superb work nevertheless! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: What an elated feeling this creates in the reading. Wonderful as usual! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhh me twinkle toes.. you do pen the lite fantastic  and as always your presentation is a cool as your uplifting poetry... Passions own poetic box of crayons   meWe wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ *gentle smiles* here ! Julian~ Thank you so much. I just kind of like that 'prissy' stuff ! KoKo~ Kick up your heels and head for the dance floor, gal ! Melissa~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it, love. Be happy, sweet friend. DecaFlame~ Tee-Hee !  It's that obvious, huh ? Just got a card from Mark today ... he's doing GREAT and misses us all ! BettyLou~ It rolled lightly to the page. Those 'happy feet' just have a mind of their own. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Look at you - tippy toeing in while I was replying ! See my note ... got a card from Cowboy today ! *big smiles* here ! Thanks, gal ... love you too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
I really liked this.Very uplifting. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Marge....a touch of "You've Got Mail"....with the twirling. Lovely. Bob |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge What wonderful words you weaved and beautiful images you portrayed.......Sue Suetang |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is beautiful Marge...just beautiful like your heart. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cheryl~ Thanks so much. Walker~ I'm really pleased you do. RMW~ LOL ! I like that ! SueTang~ Thank you very much for enjoying it so. Saunni~ You're a sweetie to think so. Thank you, sweet poet. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I needed this wonderfully light and wonderful injection of Marge Tindal tonight, thank you, you sweet, creative, two-steppin gal! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Glad to put a little music in your night ! Dancing with a prissy paintbrush on this one was fun !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't blame you for dancing with such inspiration... a delightful two-step! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Tee-Hee ! Yeppers ... he can sure get the boots to scootin' ! Thanks, sweetie ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You go, girl!! Dance, dance, dance!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, sweet poet ! I'm reeling in waltz ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marge you should be writing champagne songs....this would be one hellava great one.......you romantic soul you've done it again! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Way cool, nicely done, such smooth flowing words which in themselves dance lightly. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge love it when you dance lightly across these blue pages.....with your charm and flowing words its always a pleasure to watch. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thanks for 'popping-a-cork' with me ! ~*Marge*~ Gemini~ Glad to have you join the dance. ~*Marge*~ Charisma~ Watch me ??? No way I'm gonna let you just watch ! Come on gal - dance with me ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt like a little top-tapping pick me upper, so I came back for a dance! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thanks, gal ! Keep those toes-a-tapping ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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