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The Second |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
what are you dressed in? what are you falling for? why have you lost you tears? why have you answerd the song? night is coming from anciet waves of rivers that stream down drifting over our naked eyes so that we may be found lost in dreams that cannot give your heart to your soul anger beckons you to sell your life we you have lost all control. dressed in satin for the evenings sake hoping to romance your heart taking laughter from your pain the time is right to start don't fall for the last goodbye it isn't over quite so well just to begin your feelings again and hope to recognize your love the tears are shed for distance sake but you remain in my soul closer than the fire storm that rages out of control. |
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FireDancer123 Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 43Virginia |
*dressed in satin for the evenings sake hoping to romance your heart* *don't fall for the last goodbye it isn't over quite so well* -Those lines got me the best. I love it. Can relate quite well. It's beautiful. ::Write forever:: "If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is beautiful Michael. I think the last three lines say it all. It's amazing how such short sentences can convey so much. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This one went by wayyyy to quick.  It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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