Open Poetry #14 |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Guardian Angel around me can you read my dreams? can you hear the thoughts of us living in-between, In-between worlds above and below which way do we go Is it up if good and down if bad, or in-between if we're happy or sad? Will I go if I am good? will the pearly gates open wide? will there be friends I know on the other side? One day I will find what others before know, that there is someother place we can go, not walmart or lowes the bar or sears, but a place we go when there's no body for tears. Until that day comes i'll question the book, no chance for a preview, no chance of a look, for heaven is my love, my fellow men down here, 'twill be so this way for many a year. When the time comes I know I will see, the gates of heaven, and you waiting for me...... -Richy- (forgive me, it is early!) |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
soft angelic poem. Wondrful read. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
your so talented and i am enjoying it so ![]() |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like this a lot. Very nice images. ![]() All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
It is never too late to question what lies ahead of us, or above of us, for I believe there are wonderful majestic heavens all around, and it is our job just to be faithful to ourselves and condone to love and seek His wisdom to find our heavens. With a beautiful heart like yours, you will indeed soar when that time comes and you will be embraced with the angels at the front gate of heaven! (smiles) Such angelic perspectives! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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