Open Poetry #14 |
Another Reason Why Not |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Shock me It’s symbolic Morbid Melancholic Ether Alcoholic I want to give in I want to give in And see what I can get From this pain, misery and doubt I want to see what Living free’s about Take my pain Take it up And then refrain Be my guidance Take me through this awful place Leave your fear and dread away Upon someone else’s face The world’s just a stone Caught inside my shoe And I won’t free it now It’s something I can do I have a need You often bleed I have a need If vampires drink They also bleed I have a need So shock me It’s symbolic Mostly morbid Melancholic Put me under I’m alcoholic Take my pain Take it up Until I’m drained Show your teeth Leave them hanging out I want to see what Living free’s about |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
holy cow! AMAZING Walt! you have done it again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is awesome |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys 'preciate it yuh |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just let it all hang out eh walt??? great job with this one. . .I can feel the power and the daring here. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
pretty sharp! how true is it all? not a question to be answered, just to ponder! what great madness expressed here. mishun komepleat! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Quite an impressive write...live and be free! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
oh goody,found another Way out Walt Wonderful write |
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