Open Poetry #14 |
heart full of love |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Heart full of love Lord, tonight let them see A very different side of me Tonight I give you full control Of my mind, heart and soul Lord show me thy will Do what you want with me Cast your love upon me Make me of service to you After you bathe me Show the pleasure to me Of what it means when I Give myself willingly Master, I am yours Bring me out from behind closed doors Your will is my command If I don’t do it right Hold me in the palm of your hand Make me understand Show me Lord Put me to the test Show me that to walk In the light is best Lord, I know that the world Will tie me down Till I feel helpless You said if I call upon your name I will surely be free Thank you Lord For loving someone Like me Icyheart June 2001 |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Alan,this is soooo beautiful an i enjoyed it so much,truely talented poet you are |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
A poetic prayer so beautiful and a wonderful read. Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Alan, for all those who will read this on Saturday night... will then be ready for the Sunday to come! Thank you! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely prayer. Love for God is as passionate as one can get. Joyce |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is an outstanding poem.What a wonderful prayer reaching out to the heavenly father.Your heart is so full of love. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful devotion, Alan...we should all wish for the same...I love this one... sp everytime I close my eyes, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You know I find this exquisite...the most passionate thing you have every written.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very beautiful sentiments Alan, thank you for starting my morning with this gentle prayer, I very much enjoyed this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alan, I've tried to answer your e-mail but it comes back as undeliverable....adult! |
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