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Alan
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0 posted 2001-06-02 06:38 PM



Heart full of love

Lord, tonight let them see
A very different side of me
Tonight I give you full control
Of my mind, heart and soul

Lord show me thy will
Do what you want with me
Cast your love upon me
Make me of service to you

After you bathe me
Show the pleasure to me
Of what it means when I
Give myself willingly

Master, I am yours
Bring me out from behind closed doors
Your will is my command
If I don’t do it right
Hold me in the palm of your hand
Make me understand

Show me Lord
Put me to the test
Show me that to walk
In the light is best

Lord, I know that the world
Will tie me down
Till I feel helpless
You said if I call upon your name
I will surely be free

Thank you Lord
For loving someone
Like me

Icyheart
June 2001

© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Watersign6
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1 posted 2001-06-02 06:45 PM


Alan,this is soooo beautiful an i enjoyed
it so much,truely talented poet you are  

latin passion
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2 posted 2001-06-02 07:01 PM


A poetic prayer so beautiful and a wonderful read.

Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-06-02 07:07 PM


Alan, for all those who will read this on Saturday night...

will then be ready for the Sunday to come!

Thank you!

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4 posted 2001-06-02 07:43 PM


A lovely prayer.  Love for God is as passionate as one can get.  Joyce
Cheryl Flemming
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5 posted 2001-06-02 09:27 PM


This is an outstanding poem.What a wonderful prayer reaching out to the heavenly father.Your heart is so full of love.
snowpants
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6 posted 2001-06-03 01:28 AM


Beautiful devotion, Alan...we should all wish for the same...I love this one...

sp  

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2001-06-03 01:32 AM


You know I find this exquisite...the most passionate thing you have every written....
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-06-03 07:02 AM


Very beautiful sentiments Alan, thank you for starting my morning with this gentle prayer, I very much enjoyed this.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2001-07-07 06:04 PM


Alan, I've tried to answer your e-mail but it comes back as undeliverable....adult!  
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