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Girlfriend........ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I hear you..... I ache with you hold your hand while you cry over a man that broke your heart and keeps coming back for the pieces not quite smashed enough taking with him all the love that flows from your wounded heart and it makes me angry to see you hurting knowing you are drawn to him like a moth to that pretty blue flame and that you'll burn every time loving that which burns you and so I hold your hand waiting for you to see you're no moth girlfriend you are a beautiful Butterfly ......spread your wings....... and fly ~SEA~ *for a very special friend*  |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
This is beautiful. My best friend really needs to read this! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sea, Such a nice heartfelt write....I loved reading this and may send it on to some people I know who need to hear it....Take care Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes we are a moth by choice ... sometimes we see something special in someone that no one else can see ... and so we choose to hang on ... hoping that they can maybe see themselves thru our eyes.... sometimes a friendship and trust can be found in the ashes... and sometimes we all have our reasons for the things we that we do ... sometimes things we carry with us make us who we are... I try to look for the reason and see the why... Ive been told that blinds me..makes me a moth... maybe thats my role?? sometimes we need more than anyone can give... I think we are all moths with the potential to be a butterfly some of us just take longer to learn how to fly free.  me We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say. ~E. McCain [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A poet commented recently that there are not enough friendship poems.... so that poet, will get this link..... well done, to both the giver, and receiver... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, such a tender giving, and just being there makes all the difference, for you are a safe haven to let the wounds heal for a while..You are a wonderful friend for her...very gentle smile..so well done, both in the poem and in the actuality. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
OK.....I always obey you... I will spread my wings.....lol  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks everyone my friend is very important to me I just want her to be ok as long as she is, that's all that matters ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I always get hooked when someone writes about flutterbys |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...excellent thoughtful reading...a must I will share with my girlfriend...burning by the flame... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This person is lucky to have a friend like you. I do hope she's doing better now. keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
She is lucky to have you SEA. May she learn to resist the flame one day. For it's the only way she'll be set free to fly like the sweet butterfly she really is. Wonderful and hugs to your friend. All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Frindships like the one you are working on are forever frindships. We care for life. Great poem! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
You know what...I must thank you for posting this thoughtful poem for your friend because, it is true...there really aren't enough friendship poems out there...thank you for getting some ideas swirling around in my head! Great write, SEA...I really like this! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
simply breathtaking SEA.. amazing.. your the best! ~Jeff~ |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
simply breathtaking SEA.. amazing.. your the best! ~Jeff~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
SEA...this is a beautiful poem...your friend is lucky to have you standing in her shadow...helen |
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