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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Gardens in no re creation of time nor space his garden did not resemble Eden, nor anything spiritual other than lack of it in religious sense for all things androgynous and homogenous came to the fore at least the editor said so in touching the cover I wondered if you yet had this supposed last book started not finished by his hands he had grown tired, tired of it so I uprooted it transplanted it from here to there in your hands it will be enjoyed, regardless of critics. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Although we may grow tired and weary ... looking upon our thoughts as so much hum drum ... there are always others to ponder our thoughts ... to confide in them ... to improve them Nicely done  Rex |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would agree.. nicely done... reminds me that though we grow weary of some things..they may remain a treasure in the eye or hand of the right person... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, yes, and isn't it wonderful that it is so loved the flow and form of this...unique and quite captivating |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"Regard all art critics as useless and dangerous" futurists manifesto. I am sure I read this right, Decaflame , you can probably guess by the above quote what my interpretation of the poem is. This is definitely one for the library. I loved the flow and structure. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Intersting. I like it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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